Away from this

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Anthony, Sep 20, 2009.

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  1. Anthony

    Anthony Active Member

    I wrote this in about 5 minutes, just wanted to get some things out, and down on paper. So it might not be that good.

    She falls away from me,
    Out of my hands,
    In my dreams I'm alone now,
    Love still smolders,
    Burning me alive,
    Broken hearts like broken mirrors,
    Once fixed still broken,
    With your cracked reflection painted on,
    Feelings that can't be duplicated,
    Locked in with my failures,
    One day lived at a time,
    One day too many,
    Without you,
    I don't want to go on,
    I can't go on,
    Leaving me paralyzed,
    Waiting for the escape,
    The final atonement,
    That will take me away,
    Away from the pain,
    But don't worry about me,
    For you the pieces of my heart will always remain,
    One last breathe,
    One last wish, for one last kiss,
    One last tear,
    Last chance for goodbyes.
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Good poem! :heart:
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    a great poem so much saddness and pain I hope you find someone new to help mend your heart.
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