Bad trip(Inspired by Biohazard 0)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by the_me_that_you_know, Jul 19, 2007.

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  1. 26 years old
    Sentenced to death
    Brutal & ruthless
    Not like the rest

    The train moves slowly
    The dead come to life

    Is someone there?
    As they surround you
    The fight turns unfair

    What just happened?
    Your kind dosen't seem to want me around

    You must be careful
    The forest is full
    The wild animals bite
    Their intention is to kill

    You are alone.....
    except for the dead
    They are all hungry
    They've come to be fed

    23 people?
    Keep your guard up
    He wouldn't think twice before killing you

    If you haven't noticed
    there's some pretty freaked out things here
    Don't call me little girl
    She screams

    Who is that guy?

    You just remember
    I will shoot if you try anything
     
  2. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    Seems like a story, complex.

    I dont know what to say about this, is it about a film?

    I write poetry to express experiences feelings or thoughts that have happened to me, so this kind of poetry always leaves me at a bit of a loss.


    As a piece of poetic writing relaying a story, I get an idea of what happens in the story, so thats good.

    Not much descriptive language but as its a violent story that can be good, short sharp lines...
     
  3. It is like a story, but I did not write the story I got the idea from. It's the beginning of a video game that I was writing about, & it does contain some dialogue-not much-that is found during the game. As I did not want to spoil everything I shortened it.
     
  4. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    I gathered it was inspired by a film or video game, but .. poems usually are written to convey something, a meaning or a story ?
     
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