Badly written screamo

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Thinice, Jan 22, 2009.

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  1. Thinice

    Thinice Well-Known Member

    I wrote this yesterday. I'll record it as a song when I have the time, lots of long screams and such. Very Architects influenced.

    I'm fine being alone
    I thought I needed you by my side
    I can cope on my own
    So fade away, my love for you dies
    When did you become so cold?
    You're fucking heartless
    Cut me off completely
    Keep me hanging from this rope
    I pushed you away from me
    That's where you'll stay
    I'm alone and shattered
    I don't think I need you anymore
    I miss you
    It's just me
    Alone again

    This is the end
    You left me brokenhearted
    This could be the end of everything
    Or the start of something new
    But its without you

    The lyrics contradict themselves, but thats how I feel.
     
  2. AlexDanish

    AlexDanish Account Closed

    Architects isn't screamo...?

    Nice lyrics though, btw.
     
  3. Thinice

    Thinice Well-Known Member

    ^^ The lyrics are quite Architects inspired, but I'll be recording it as screamo.

    And thanks!
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I liked it :hug:
     
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