Beat me Senseless

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BioHomocide, Mar 17, 2009.

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  1. BioHomocide

    BioHomocide Well-Known Member

    Here's something I wrote a short while ago. I don't know if it's bad or good, I just put how I feel as simply as possible. I try to use words that anyone could understand.

    Beat me senseless.
    Beat me numb.
    Take everything away
    Take away my humanity
    Cut out my tongue
    Steal my freedom of speech
    Crush my hands and break my fingers
    My words are damned anyway
    Blind my eyes
    So I can't see the truth

    Push me down....
    Beat me senseless.
    Don't allow me to be like you
    What you hate
    A Hypocrite
     
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