Beautiful Soul

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by unknown loner, Oct 19, 2009.

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  1. unknown loner

    unknown loner Active Member

    Cold world turns day by day
    More people labeled “different”
    More people die by ignorance
    Just to have a bit of love in their lives

    Tears fall down for the lost beautiful souls
    Thunder is heard for their last scream for help
    Lightning is seen for how the words strike them in the hearts
    In the wind you hear their voice not regretting a single feeling

    Another heart broken
    Because another’s world was broken
    By the one singled out body
    The world around them makes them feel wrong

    Another knife is struck in the heart they use to love with
    Another gun blast silences their opportunity to speak out
    Another blow to the head can’t make them forget that forbidden love
    Another light is seen so that beautiful soul is taken away from us

    More blood on the street
    It touches the children’s feet
    They see the consequence
    For love that’s against some stupid law

    There is no need for anybody to be fixed
    You can’t fix the un-broken
    They are just making more broken hearts
    For the ones they think they are helping

    Another day goes by in this cold world
    All we see is love that is not real
    Cause we just had to beat out the ones who truly loved
    We had to take away another beautiful soul
  2. Vangelis

    Vangelis Well-Known Member

    Powerful and evocative...sad tooo :(
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    wow, I love it :)
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    well written and very sad
  5. *sparkle*

    *sparkle* Staff Alumni

    its good :hug: but sad :(
  6. FallenRyo

    FallenRyo Active Member

    Good poem; sad but moving. Thats how a poem truly should always be.
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