Because Of Its Frailty

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Julia-C, Aug 11, 2011.

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  1. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    These images roll through my mind
    Like a broken movie that has no end
    Searching for peace that I can’t find
    The past not allowing my heart to mend

    Sensations of his hands claw at my skin
    Leaving a filth and unresolved stain
    20 years of washing away his sin
    But it has all been meaningless and in vain

    His scent still smothers my breaths
    Thickening the air with a sad reality
    And although I have tried my best
    My heart breaks because of its frailty

  2. MoAnamCara

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  3. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    As usual you capture emotion so well. :hug:
  4. Lilly

    Lilly Well-Known Member

    Wonderful. I truly felt the emotion in it and it moved me. your a great poet, please always continue writing <3
  5. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member


    Thank you
    Thank you very much :)
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