before I go out in to the world

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by cinZamurai, Oct 12, 2008.

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  1. cinZamurai

    cinZamurai Well-Known Member

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    the thoughts dim
    from red to yellow



    a thick fog settels
    eyes turns center up
    and tears dry



    a deep exhale
    particles reflected by the sun
    as they tingle down




    eyes shuts
    and opens
    again
















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  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Good poem :)
     
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