Beginnings of a Note

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by In Limbo, Apr 7, 2011.

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  1. In Limbo

    In Limbo Forum Buddy

    I'm unreal,

    I cower, it is everywhere a nameless
    yet known dread.

    Lump in my throat,
    when taps turn on I'll have my peace.
    In that I'll know my end.

    In nothingness and white noise,
    Ipod on circular.

    For the only success I no longer fear...
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    I hope you get to use this note in your old age as you are very cared for here...but, as always, you talent is quite apparent...J
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I love it i hope you continue writing hugs
  4. Kathy

    Kathy Well-Known Member

    Wow. Seriously wow... I can relate to this poem so much. Somehow your writing always seems to potray the feeling of hoplessness so well. I really really like this.
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