Between the Lines

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by The_Discarded, Jul 24, 2007.

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  1. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    (*Note: first line, first word; second line, second word; third line, third word; and anon... :shhh: )


    Now I'm beginning to see a sort of hatred in your eyes
    And I am well aware that it's not "all in my head"
    I wonder, will you just come out and say it?
    There can not be anything more frustrating than blatant evasion of truth
    Contrived words, thoughtlessly spat out like mal-consumed chicken meat
    I will not accept anymore of your minced and modified meals
    I simply don't want to waste your precious time, or mine
    And people can't read between lines any way


     
  2. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    :sad: You'd better not be going anywhere. Hmm.

    'Tis a really good poem though, I like how you use words and stuff. :hug:
     
  3. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Discarded,
    Wow I love this poem. I hope that you are not going anywhere. You are a great help here to many people. This poem is deep and emotional. I like the way you worded the poem. If you ever need to talk I am here for you. Take care and I love you sweetie. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  4. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    Thank you both. :hug: :hug:
     
  5. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    Love it, as always. Sincerely hope you're not going anywhere.
     
  6. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Hun, this is beautifully written. That sentence that was in it :nono: you not go anywheres. :hug:
     
  7. silent_enigma

    silent_enigma Well-Known Member

    Maybe Discarded just means that he/she will stick to driving in the right-hand lane. (groan!) (Assuming they're in the U.S.)
     
  8. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    Thanks, Kells and others. :hug:

    :laugh::bleh:
     
  9. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    wonderful :heart:
     
  10. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    It is a very well written poem beautiful I enjoy reading all of your poetry
     
  11. Songie

    Songie Well-Known Member

    Wow! Out of all of the poetry I have read on this site, this is most definitely one of my favorites. Its so creative, the way you wrote it. I'm completely amazed. I LOVED IT!!! -Songie:biggrin:
     
  12. pittfall

    pittfall Active Member

    I like the way you write
     
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