Bio Resonance Therapy

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thesemomentsastheypass, Sep 30, 2007.

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  1. thesemomentsastheypass

    thesemomentsastheypass Well-Known Member

    My mate’s got this machine
    that’s supposed to make things better
    balancing the vibrations of body and brain
    and I can’t quite make up my mind
    if it’s sent back from the future
    or dragging its heels from the past

    He has a truckload of
    Testimonials and one of them reads
    That relieved from Chester has all-but
    got rid of her liver disease
    and agoraphobic from Leeds
    has never felt quite so at ease

    So I had a go. Try it and see,
    wondered what the diagnosis
    might be. Laid back, lids down,
    Straps lashed around the wrist,
    you get the general gist

    My mate knocked himself out,
    twiddled the knobs, fiddled with files,
    buttons, gorged on his laptop;
    a technological glutton
    Turned it up, resonance
    well off the chart

    But, alas, the machine couldn’t reverse
    The scars on my heart.
     
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  2. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    crikey, have you been struck by lightning? thats like a hundred times more active than any of your other poems i've read. well done, good read
     
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