Birth and Death

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  1. Dreamer uk

    Dreamer uk Well-Known Member

    Hi, here is a poem I wrote, you'll have to excuse me if it has depressing undertones, I'm feeling low. I'm gonna dedicate it to Eric Keller, who is unfortunately no longer with us and thus is free of the pain this life causes.

    It is called, "Birth and Death", I hope you like it.

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    From Heaven, he descends to Earth.
    The summer of love was his birth
    In a world of suffering & pain
    Nothing will ever be the same.

    My empty life, I just moan,
    is not worth living on my own
    I cannot cope, give me a rope, there is no hope
    I have the liberty to remove my misery

    Let my soul be free, I await my destiny
    Death scares me not, but in my mind
    I'm sorry for the sorrow I leave behind

    I am grateful for the life I've had
    Even though it's been very sad
    I'm falling apart, dying from a broken heart

    Cannot go on feeling this way
    Don't want to live another day
    I cannot handle this strife, thrown at me by life
    Oh God in the sky, please let me die!
     
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  2. carol2237

    carol2237 Guest

    Very nice poem hun. I can relate to that. *huggles*

    Caroline
    ~if your going through hell, keep on going~
     
  3. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    Very well written. :hug: Thank you for sharing. :smile:
     
  4. Dreamer uk

    Dreamer uk Well-Known Member

    Thank you both
     
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