Black hole

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Teenmomstatistic, Jun 29, 2016.

  1. You say you love me.
    I say you're bluffing.
    You say you need me.
    Why don't you just free me...?
    Vindictive, malicious, demented, insane.
    I never thought you would screw with my brain.
    I was naive and ignorant.
    A simple-minded hypocrite.
    An optimistic child with pessimistic tendencies.
    I never thought it was possible
    to walk the earth without a soul,
    until I gazed in your black eyes
    as you tried to claim my life.
    When there is a "love" that eats your soul,
    it's not love it's a black hole.
    It will consume my very essence bit by bit.
    When nothing is left nobody will give a shit.
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  2. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Writer, Musician, Fun Lover, Magic Maker

    I am sorry you are feeling this way, but you have some great writing talent :)
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  3. Thank you very much :)
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  4. SinisterKid

    SinisterKid Safety & Support SF Supporter

    "An optimistic child with pessimistic tendencies."

    I really like that line, summons up some great imagery.
  5. Huw

    Huw Well-Known Member

    "An optimistic child with pessimistic tendencies."

    This reminds me of St Paul who said, "The good I would I do not. That which I hate I do".