Black Sky

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by shatteredsoul, Feb 13, 2006.

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  1. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    The black sky holds me tight
    While i lay dying,
    In my own puddle of blood
    It enfolds my body
    Like a cool, soft blanket
    As i die, i remember the warmth
    It gave me,
    The welcome it proceded.
    To show me
    As death slowly takes over my body
    I close my eyelids softly
    In the warmth of the black sky
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    That was another great peom! hun, I loved it!
     
  3. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    *bows* thank you thank you
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    You are welcome...

    BP
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    wonderful!
     
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