Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Tahiti, Jan 18, 2007.

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  1. Tahiti

    Tahiti Well-Known Member

    Wheee I only have a few minutes left to write something cuz school is close to ending so I'm juss gonna submit a stupid poem if you can even call it a poem that I made up long ago!

    Can't Think Of Title

    Strange man is he

    That takes no heed

    To notice the hole

    So close to his toe

    That he walks straight on

    Then falls to despair

    Why did he not

    Notice or care?

    sort of christian I guess I wrote this when I was a christian years ago. :dry:
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    this is not stupid at shows a talent and a wonderful potential...keep up the writing...big hugs, Jackie
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