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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by OranGauvain, Jul 28, 2011.

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  1. OranGauvain

    OranGauvain Member

    Looking at my life its full of mistakes………….
    there’s no way to escape my fate …….
    losing my mind at a dramatic rate…..
    the memories of heart break….
    pause…. hesitate…..as time escapes….
    time’s a healer but I don’t have the time It takes…
    no time to wait.....need time to learn from my mistakes…
    as the planet rotates….
    the laws of time I try to reshape……
    im FCKED…cuz…………..
    mother-nature n father-time soul mates…..
     
  2. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    Hey Oran,

    This was very good. I enjoyed reading this.

    Just from reading your poem, I have to believe you have learned from some of your mistakes. I hope you continue to do learn from them and not dwell on them too much; do you think that there is not enough time while you are alive to let time heal everything or at least heal enough to ease most of the pain? Also, your poem is rational and I don't see any sign of you losing your mind, for what it's worth. ;)

    Alex
     
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