Blinded

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  1. Blinded


    Shrouded in veils of pain,
    covered by shadows
    so that no sight remains
    Blinded and insane
    Screaming the while silent unheard pleas,
    begging for some form of release
    What purpose this madness,
    this fury with the way of things
    all gone awry;
    When there’s nothing left to do
    but slowly die,
    one hundred deaths
    have I already met
    and no more grace
    is in me left
    And endless is this bitter road
    Unbearable this heavy load
    that takes me further down
    to circles of hell,
    through curse unimaginable,
    witness to my own demise,
    piercing my very soul and eyes...


    FAL1​
     
  2. Mya

    Mya Well-Known Member

    oh wow that was awsome what inspiered you? i love this poem!!!!
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    That was awesome and I'm afraid I know what inspired you... unbearable despair.:sad: You're gifted as hell, but I'd rather see you un-gifted and not rotting in such sorrow and discontent...

    love,

    least
     
  4. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    It's so unbeleivable how something can be so sad and beautiful at the sametime. Although I am afraid what inspired this was too painful. I am sorry for all the sorrow and pain, I wish I could take it all away.

    Thanks for sharing your creations with us, I always enjoy seeing your poetry. :hug: :hug:






    The amazed,
    Carolyn
     
  5. Thank you for delving into and understanding my pain *sigh*

    {{FAL1}}
     
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wonderfully written hun..

    BP
     
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