Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by NPNS, Dec 31, 2008.

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  1. NPNS

    NPNS Well-Known Member

    I stare blankly at walls
    As if seeing through
    Eyes out of focus
    Brain disengaged

    So much movement around me
    But I still don't see
    You catch my hand lightly
    And I shrug you away

    This tinyest of motions says so much
    You look towards me
    As if to say...

    But the words don't come
    There is only silence
    How could I possibly tell you
    What happened that day
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    lovely poem :heart:
  3. NPNS

    NPNS Well-Known Member

    Thanks. :hug:
  4. aki

    aki Well-Known Member

    that is very beautiful, well done.
  5. NPNS

    NPNS Well-Known Member

    Thanks :smile:

    it took me about 10 minutes to write a few weeks ago. Unfortunately, I have complete writers block at the moment, and have done for a long time now. I didn't think that it was that good, but thought I'd post it anyway.
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