Bloodied Tears (Triggering?)

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  1. Mibani

    Mibani Member

    I'm lost.
    Can you come find me?

    I'm hurt.
    Can you come heal me?

    I'm crying.
    Can you come comfort me?

    No.
    You wont ever, will you?

    Nah.
    Such simple words cause so much pain.

    Meh.
    Why will you not answer me anymore?

    You told me that I had your heart,
    So why isn't it broken?

    You told me I had your soul,
    So why aren't you sad?

    Is it because,
    You have no heart?

    Could it be that,
    You have no soul?

    Did I make a deal with the Devil?
    Or was it all just a sham?

    Did I fall for a monster?
    Or was it my fault all along?

    "I love you"
    Emotionless lies, were they not?

    "I need you"
    You were a liar, you never did.

    "I can't wait to hold you"
    Or were you just a curious boy who didn't want me in the first place?

    Death was never the question,
    For you, I would never.

    But for tonight,
    Death will be the answer-
    As I'd never put this pain onto you.
     
  2. souncide

    souncide Well-Known Member

    It has a lot of emotion in it, you can tell. I liked it (and felt a bit worried at the end, for some reason).
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    death is not the answer healing is and creating a strong you to go on and meet someone who deserves your love hugs
     
  4. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This is very sad and very well written...and I am glad you are with us
     
  5. Mibani

    Mibani Member

    Thank you guys for enjoying it. It really was emotion pumped out into words... I didn't know how everyone would like it, considering how I write.
     
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