Bloody Blue Hue

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by LDA, Mar 13, 2010.

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  1. LDA

    LDA Well-Known Member

    (Sorry about the language, tell me if it's not allowed and I'll edit.)

    Her smile, it arrives in me
    It just stares, it doesn't listen
    So glad to see you here,
    With me blazin' in Hell
    You were fucking mistaken
    About my intentions

    The heights that you led me to
    And now we've suddenly dropped
    I can't remember this place
    One foot in the shadow
    This pill is just too hard to swallow
    And their act is much too
    Much too hard to follow

    You've all dyed my heart
    A bright bloody blue hue
    Do you care? You fucking abandoned me
    You know you're gonna lose
    Into your mind I'll be cut in, cutting loose

    There's never time to say
    More than
    Call the pain by another name
    In our confessions
    Never out of focus

    While colors flit around the street
    Shame over mercy every time
    I'll watch you cry, you're bleeding, neat
    I calmly wish to hear you screaming
    I want you sobbing
    And praying to your God.

    Unfortunately for you,
    I'm your God as of now
    But I will see you in Hell.
  2. Things

    Things Well-Known Member

    Swearing's nothing to be worried about.

    I love angry poetry. There's some about the title that drew me in. This part stuck with me: A bright bloody blue hue.

    I don't know why, but I keep imagining someone singing this.

    I interpet the story to be about a person that's been locked away in a psych world by people they thought were loved ones. They feel abandoned, and obviously, very pissed.
  3. LDA

    LDA Well-Known Member

    Hmm that's a very close interpretation, Things, and yes I can imagine someone singing it as a song too. I like it. Thank you.
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