bloody hell I am drunk once more (acrostic)!

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lentil Illness, Oct 7, 2006.

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  1. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    Arterial blood
    Covers the wall
    Red blood red
    Over us all
    Soaks us all
    This awful acrostic
    Is the end of it all
    Crap poetic device
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Damn it Lentil, I STILL say you write better when drunk than many do stone sober!!:rolleyes: :wink: :smile:

    Anyway, I like it!:smile: :smile:

    love,

    least
     
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