'Breathless"

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Oct 29, 2007.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    For a hundred miles now I've stared at the same spot on my windsheild
    And with all the reasons why I couldn't tell you where I turned
    I just knew that inside somewhere I would have to yield
    And take the risks that I knew would burn.

    So here I sit admist a hundred smileing faces
    Reflecting on what I have learned
    And they all look the same despite their intentions
    Time to risk another turn.

    And while the miles of pavement pass
    I write my own directions
    Tho I know this turn might be my last
    Its the curves that leave me breathless.

    ~C
     
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    This one is beautiful. I like this one better than the other one you wrote. Well done :hug:
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I love it!:smile:
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    It's wonderful :D
     
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