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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Ze'ev-Hayalim, Sep 24, 2007.

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  1. i woke to find you smiling
    a tense mockery of life
    i woke to find you dying
    the prometheus of strife

    here i will bury you
    here i will discard you
    here i will forsake you
    here, i will forget you

    my every step, you've watched me fallen
    phantasmal eyes none but you abhor
    my every care and love, you've stolen
    whispered into my ear, bleed, bleed, bleed some more.

    here i will throw you
    here i will break you
    here i will destroy you
    here, i will forget you

    I love you, yet i hate you still...
     
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    this is beautifully written Gabe. :hug: Very sad but I really enjoyed reading it.
     
  3. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    :hug: Gabe, this is so lovely, yet so sad.
     
  4. i wrote this poem for my last boyfriend, a true idiot if one existed.
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug:
     
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