Broken Britain

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Kaos General, Aug 17, 2011.

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  1. Kaos General

    Kaos General Well-Known Member

    Whats it all about,

    with all the riots in the UK,

    the whole country is kickin off,

    an the priministers on holiday,

    the kids wanna send a message,

    but they`re doing it the wrong way,

    communitys were fighting back,

    all i can say is fair play,

    they`re smashing up the cities,

    looting burning shops and homes,

    the old bill had no chance,

    dodgin bottles, bricks an stones,

    its took something like this you see,

    for the government to listen,

    they didnt see it coming,

    welcome to broken Britain,

    where no body wants to pay their own way,

    thats the attitude of the kids today,

    no responsibility in society,

    livin on a wage called JSA,

    no job no money no self respect,

    waiting for a gyro,

    so they can go an get wrecked,

    100 pound a fortnight,

    i aint bein funny,

    but i spend double that in one night,

    ive been in them shoes,

    i cant really critisize,

    understand the situation,

    seen it with my own eyes,

    been there done that,

    even had a dole card,

    then i turned my life around,

    now i got a gold card,

    trust me,

    coz i speak the truth,

    look no further,

    im living proof,

    when the chance arrises,

    go ahead and take it,

    unless you try a little bit,

    your never gonna make it,

    stuck in the same rutt,

    sleepin with the same slut,

    always gettin of your nut,

    but never gettin off your butt,

    to do something about it,

    will things change,

    i very much doubt it,

    with pollitics,


    the climates changin,

    kids are dien,

    guns are blazin,

    if the under age mothers,

    and the kids their raisin,

    dont end up the same,

    it would be amazin,

    all they need is inspiration,

    coz they got no motivation,

    shit schools poor education,

    failing youths all across the nation,

    its time to save the UK,

    come together now,

    hope and pray,

    its not gone too far,

    you no what I say,

    why wait lets start today!
  2. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    excellent poem Wayne :thumbup:
    and well said
  3. black orchid

    black orchid Well-Known Member

  4. Kaos General

    Kaos General Well-Known Member

    nothing compared to what ive just put on facebook
  5. black orchid

    black orchid Well-Known Member

    I like this one better
  6. texaskitty

    texaskitty SF Cat Lady Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Very well done. :hug:
  7. Jelly

    Jelly Well-Known Member

    Very expressive and good flow. Great work. :)
  8. Kaos General

    Kaos General Well-Known Member

    I need to get cliff richard outta my head
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