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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by luso, Aug 20, 2007.

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  1. luso

    luso Active Member

    I love you
    You never will
    I would kill for you,
    but you don´t feel

    You are my world
    but I´m not yours
    You don´t like me the way I like you
    This must be a lost cause.

    I dream about you all night long
    I wake and feel lost
    I think about you all the time
    but you don´t even see me when I walk by.

    I try to talk with you when I can
    and it just seams you don´t care
    I am really trying to forget you,
    but its hard, I just can´t

    When I look at you in the eyes,
    I go deep into your soul,
    I just think I know you best
    than anyone could ever do

    I´m trying to forget you now,
    and I´m crying, thinking about you,
    and I know we could be happy
    I love you, and always will
     
  2. Blackness

    Blackness Guest

    I know how that feels all too well
     
  3. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Luso,
    Oh sweetie I am so sorry that your feeling that way. I know how that feels too. This poem has a lot of emotion in it and is deep. I am here if you ever wish to talk. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  4. luso

    luso Active Member

    thank you...!
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    beautiful writing :)
     
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