But everyone else is beautiful

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  1. solost22

    solost22 Member

    This poem is about being rejected by society and believing its you looks

    Hide myself from society
    hide away my deficiency.
    I've been down this road before.
    The beauty of death I adore.

    A razor blade will numb the pain
    thoughts of death will keep me sane.
    My name around here is forgetful,
    but everyone's name is beautiful!

    I just want to be just like you
    I want to do the things you do.
    Maybe I could come along
    or that’s right, your already gone.

    I wear the same clothes to feel the same
    maybe than you'll remember my name.
    Do these clothes fit, are they suitable?
    But everyone else looks beautiful!

    I'm as scared as scared can be
    I just want people to like me.
    Maybe its a curse I need to break?
    Hopefully there’s a potion I can take.

    I can't help how God made me
    I know others out there they can see,
    hard that we haven't lost control.
    But everyone else is beautiful!

  2. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Love the way you rhymed control with beautiful, plus it delivers a profound message. Good work!
  3. Daphna

    Daphna Well-Known Member

    You are beautiful too. Discover your own beauty and learn to appreciate how you are made. You are crafted to be you, not the next person. Confidence isn't given it is made. Beauty is only skin deep, its the beauty of the soul that lasts forever. Peace be with you. ((hug))
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