Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, May 17, 2007.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Once again
    Sickness spills
    Over the edges
    Hatred's thrill
    Sit and endure
    Sit so still
    Feel it fill
    Feel it kill
    Cry what you can
    Try what you will
    There is no relief
    Just let it spill

    One request
    I ask of you
    One suggestion
    Hear me through
    All I ask
    I ask of you
    What I need
    Is all I do
    Forgive me please
    I beg of you
    Forgive my needs
    Tho they're few
    I might imply
    Reasons I
    Would rather lie
    Than tell you why
    I cant explain
    I live the answer
    Follow my life
    I am your cancer.

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Beautifully done! Glad to see you back, I've missed you!!:smile: :smile:
  3. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Its great to see you around again. Missed ya. :hug:

    This poem is very beautifully written. =)

  4. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    I like it, very well-written. Brilliance perhaps, but I'm not an accurate judge of such things.
  5. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    And I have missed YOU.....

    thank you.

  6. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

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