Can't breathe

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BornFree, Oct 10, 2012.

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  1. BornFree

    BornFree Well-Known Member

    Everything closing in constricted
    No air coming in everythings restricted
    No way forward No way through
    Nothing left to say nothing to do

    Pain of every sort overwhelmingly intense
    Flooding bombarding every sense
    How to carry on
    Unable to be strong

    Pathetic useless losing the fight
    Cant carry on cant find the light
    Is there a point is there a way
    When floundering nothing to say

    There just seems to be no end
    No means to come back to mend
    This broken person inside and out
    Resources depleted nothing left no doubt

    Im far too coward
    No path forward
    Desperate to leave
    No air cant breathe.
  2. MoAnamCara

    MoAnamCara SF Artist

    :arms: sad for you.
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Oh hun im sorry you are feeling there is no way out there is hun your poetry your words you use them so well hun keep writing keep releasing the pain this way it helps
    You say all your resources are used up hell no hun you go back and reuse the ones you already used this time make t hem hear you ok hugs
  4. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    I am so sorry you are feeling this way, but know how much you mean to me and many people here...and to us you are a breath of fresh air
  5. youRprecious!

    youRprecious! Antiquities Friend

    I feel led to reply using some verse
    Ditsy, it's true life is very perverse
    We all start out strong, pursuing our dreams
    Then they crash to the ground, - well that's how it seems

    Then we start asking questions and wondering why?
    We go to the hope well, and find it's run dry
    But we know there's SF, it's a great place to come
    Where folk all accept the sound of our drum

    And we find strength to put it all down in our words
    (Even if we don't think we're great poetry nerds!)
    Having people who love us, although through a screen
    Makes it all a bit lighter from how it has been

    So keep writing your thoughts Dits -
    We love that you're here
    And we're not letting nitwits
    Dispose of our cheer

    So I hope this has cheered you a little, for sure
    When you start feeling down hun, please write here some more :)
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