Can't you see?! Don't you care?!

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Perfectly Imperfect, Jun 12, 2007.

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  1. Can't you see? Don't you care
    I want to die?
    Don't you listen? Can't you hear
    My silent cry?
    Won't you turn? Can't you hold
    Me to your heart?
    Are you afraid of what might follow
    Once you start?

    Would you rather not believe
    I'm in such pain
    That all your sense and good advice
    Must be in vain?

    Would you rather tell yourself
    I'll be OK,
    And all this adolescent angst
    Will go away?

    Would I also swim across
    This lake alone!
    But if you cannot swim with me,
    I know I'll drown.
  2. painfulbliss

    painfulbliss Well-Known Member

    wow i dont know what to say but that was beautiful and great. :hug: :rose:
  3. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    Sis! :cry: :hug:

    I see you, I hear you as well. You aren't alone in this, it just feels that way. I often feel as you do with this too. Hang in there Sisseh, I love you. :hug:
  4. Lestat

    Lestat Well-Known Member

    That was great. bravo! I read that in such a mad voice....
  5. danni

    danni Chat Buddy

    :cry: :hug: that was sad. hole on hun we all here for ya :hug:
  6. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    :hug: that was really good.
  7. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    :hug: Jacque. :wub: it.
  8. Nessa Doll

    Nessa Doll Member

    :sad: I care I love you I want you to get better. I want us all to get better... That was a good poem. But very sad. Love to you xoxo
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