Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Sep 21, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    That an expression so open
    Could dare escape
    Capture the silence
    With only a glance
    Soundless sadness resonates
    Happiness never had a chance
    I lean in closer to examine
    The space so clear between your eyes
    And see whats lurking round in there
    Before I'd never realized
    That deep within and so pristine
    Where tears have washed the canvas clean
    The space remains and stares at me
    Emptiness never lies.

  2. Oh God Curtius, I don't know exactly what you glimpsed, but it must have been one helluva view, for you to capture it so succinctly, even the emptiness. What a palette you present. It makes me want to cry (Reticent tears)...

  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    ...what FAL1 said....and HOW she said it...:eek:hmy: :unsure: :blink: :smile: You're incredible, you are! What a creative way to rhyme and rhythm:wink:

    Thanks for sharing your innervision with us, Curtius!:smile: :smile:

  4. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    That was so great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    thanks so much for sharing, you're great hun, absolutely magnificent!!!!!!!

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