Catch 22

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  1. Catch 22


    So many different ways to go wrong
    Life is a trap
    Like a spider’s web
    that won’t let go
    Tangled in details
    of insignificance,
    one thread at a time
    till they all enclose you
    and hold you paralyzed
    There’s no room to move
    And it’s hard to breathe
    And all you want to do is leave
    But suffering this damned eternity
    you die the slowest death there is
    Whispers of hope taunting the breeze
    that once existed, blowing through your soul
    Tortured by the memory
    Begging for some blessed mercy
    but there is no escape,
    because you cared,
    donated yourself,
    yet no reward in how you’ve fared,
    within the grip of having all battles lost,
    and who could ever count the cost
    Now you’re simply waiting for the end,
    inspite of those conundrums rallied against
    Merely a shadow of your former self
    Oh, the terror and the ache ~
    And nothing left to do
    but
    wait


    FAL1
     
  2. Allo..

    Allo.. Well-Known Member

    Thats beautiful.. your so talented.. How do you write like that?!!

    Take care _%
     
  3. Pain twists my soul, shapes my language. I wouldn't wish it on anyone - but thanks...

    FAL1
     
  4. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    very haunting, only that best of writers can achieve that status.
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Beautifully haunting, indeed...:sad: I am so sorry for the feelings that brought this beautiful opus into being.:sad:

    much love always, and hope too,

    least
     
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