Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Gemballs, Feb 4, 2011.

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  1. Gemballs

    Gemballs Well-Known Member

    My life is like a prison
    Please god just let me out
    No one is here to listen
    Hearing when you shout

    Let me climb the walls of insanity
    To ride the waves of despair
    If you fall it doesn’t matter
    Because there’s no one to care.

    Used to wish for a window
    To be able to see the birds, trees and sky
    However your better without one
    This will stop your from aiming too high

    To be able to watch freedom, is painful
    For those who are locked away
    To see joy, love and happiness
    Another price to which you pay

    Strong is so good, weak is so bad
    Its false but its true
    Your mind can make the choice
    It will enforce it too

    Cell walls which are built by society
    With rules which are there to adhere
    If you breach what is acceptable
    You have to beware

    Make sure you hide the pain, carry on
    Routine is the key
    Do not let on that your not
    What you are pretending to be

    Lock all of it up, inside you
    How badly that bodes
    Look out for that one day
    When it all explodes

    Leaving nothing but a shell
    Base functionality too
    Killing all else

    so how do you do it? Grow?
    With a time bomb right inside?
    Or how do you defuse it?
    Without destroying the ride?

    The truth is..
    That you just simply… cant.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    so well stated no you can't be something you are not. You cannot wear a mask of being well when you are suffering greatly. What you do is get some support some help to heal all the suffering I love your poem it says much
  3. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    this is really nice and true
  4. Gemballs

    Gemballs Well-Known Member

    thanks to both
  5. The Scream

    The Scream Well-Known Member

    beautiful =]
  6. Kaos General

    Kaos General Well-Known Member

    Did you just write that? its pretty good
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