Chained by the Faith of the...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by JustFirefly, Apr 19, 2011.

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  1. JustFirefly

    JustFirefly Well-Known Member

    Chained By The Faith Of The D*mned

    The Truth Collapses
    Under the Pressure of What my expectations are...
    And what my expectations should be.

    The Walls Are Crumbling
    Within these Rooms i created lies Destruction
    Within these walls Lies the chamber of my heart

    Something A Little Twisted
    As my soul starts to catch fire from her sins
    As my heart Bursts into the flames of death...

    Death Brings Life
    Resurrected By the Motions of your Healing Hand
    Resurrecting Hope that has been Gone For To Long

    Motionless Turns To Motion
    Beating Once more before the open sky...
    Beating as the shadows of death Dissipate

    Please tell me what you think.
    Feedback is wonderful.
    If youd like to know what its about let me know.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I am glad you found healing and someone that cared to reach out to you
    Nicely written hugs
  3. JustFirefly

    JustFirefly Well-Known Member

    Thank you. Means more then you realize.
    Just a long battle with everything... Maybe it will end.
  4. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    I get the impression it's about losing faith in the trust of another, and because of that lost faith the world around you comes crashing in. Causing you to question everything, and have little trust in your own decisions. Then the opportunity to trust again allows you to slowly let another's kindness heal you.

    I enjoyed reading this, and one thing I like about poetry is when it is written as well as this one, it allows for personal interpretation from reader to reader. Thank you for posting. I look forward to reading more from you.
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