Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by hollowvoice, Dec 4, 2010.

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  1. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    torn between the dark and light
    i start today another fight
    despair and anger
    in my thoughts
    im losing hope
    and losing more
    i can barely raise my head
    no will left to leave my bed
    so now i have a choice to make
    to end this void
    or live as fake
    the darkness is surrounding me
    dragging me down
    for all to see
    i tried to rise
    to leave my pain
    but you hold me down
    held in chains
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You describe depression so well it is a chain that hold us down
    the darkness takes over you
    then you are lost at what to do
    you keep fighting okay
    get some help support meds i know
    but i think sometimes they help
    i have decided to try them now myself
    so please you try to do whatever it takes
    to find you again meds therapy but just do.
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This is so well written and brings the images to mind manyof us struggle with...thanks for sharing, sweetie, J
  4. doityourself

    doityourself Well-Known Member

    Good to see you posting.
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