Cheating Death

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by In Limbo, Nov 14, 2010.

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  1. In Limbo

    In Limbo Forum Buddy

    Another one of mine....thanks in advance for reading

    I heard you whimper,
    saw you break,
    Betrayed and beaten, knew that I had made mistakes
    of deepest hurt which now returned to stab once more.
    The gravest one you now loathed me for.

    Saw you repulsed
    Knew that you reeled,
    Because of times you used to kneel
    And men in finery and wisdom told that heaven came all in due time.
    And I was trying to cut that line.

    You pulled me close
    Your strong embrace,
    Our tears mingled on my face
    Then dragging me reluctant to my first new breath.
    Wrenching me, from that cheating death.
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Again, the words are powerful and the skill so very impressive...truly a gift...J
  3. In Limbo

    In Limbo Forum Buddy

    Thanks J, like most creativity it comes in fits and starts but the material I've posted here is from a hot patch in March - I've got a few things in the pipeline at the moment but they're not quite making it onto paper just yet.

    Watch this space....;)
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