Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Julia-C, Feb 25, 2011.

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  1. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Void of meaning, left alone,
    Silent discourse, end unknown.

    Enigma now reigns, answers need found,
    Ashamed to live, destined six feet down.

    Cold wet earth, crushing out breath,
    Strategies last move, of Chess.
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    This is a strong poem. I really like the first stanza and the end where I think you are talking of life and our choices as "strategies" and "chess."
  3. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Thank you Acy. Yeah it's about how the choices we make in life lead to a final move. That move can be a winning move, or a losing move.
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