Chromatic Sand ||

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by cinZamurai, Dec 11, 2008.

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  1. cinZamurai

    cinZamurai Well-Known Member

    Encapsulated in ice

    green blue crystal

    cold and chill frozen like a pie

    watching

    from within


    Storming
    red orange purple

    melting tickling

    dreamy

    weak limbs takes steps out on the fair green

    watch the tingling stars

    moves a finger

    an arm

    stretching a leg

    arching the sleepy back


    curios one

    now see as well as feel


    dark ocean sky gray moons and shadow over lands

    Horizon shattering and cracking braking
    Steaming from far and rolling down the heart

    White, gold and shining cyan grows in west

    heating the earth
    Encompasses the shades

    silver tears
    braking up in the arc of a majestic color display

    my very first day​
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I like it :biggrin:
     
  3. cinZamurai

    cinZamurai Well-Known Member

    Thank you for your words :smile:
     
  4. daredhead

    daredhead Well-Known Member

    Great job! Wonderful use of imagery.:biggrin:
     
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