Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by LunaShadow, Oct 15, 2012.

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  1. LunaShadow

    LunaShadow Active Member


    How can something that was broken,
    be shattered once more?

    But Time
    and Distance found a way,
    melting the ice around her heart
    with patience,
    with care,
    with safety,
    and once revealed,
    was snapped once more by Reality.

    On and on,
    she walks this path alone,
    engulfed by darkness,
    surrounded by shadows,
    for any other company
    she must leave,
    though it pains her,
    though it breaks her,
    even before departure starts.

    if it’s just temporary…
    the little wanderer
    weeps all the more,
    for it’s only a prelude to the end,
    the bitter sweet end,
    when she can walk on no more.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Oh hun how i can so relate to your words hun and i am sorry your soul has been shattered yet again i know how that feels i do but just know hun it can mend again it can. It will ok
    with the right care and compassion hun you will heal as will I hugs
  3. LunaShadow

    LunaShadow Active Member

    Thank you, it's always nice, good to know that there is someone out there who knows how it feels. :)
  4. souncide

    souncide Well-Known Member

    It's beautiful in a sad kind of way. But still beautifull. Liked it a lot.
  5. LunaShadow

    LunaShadow Active Member

    Thank you :) I write a lot of poetry, but rarely share the deeply personal ones like this one, on account of not wanting to worry my friends/family. It means a lot that you like it and think it's beautiful :)
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