'Cold'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Nov 13, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    The warmth left the room
    Hours ago
    But my mind stays in its freezing corner
    My conscience says soon
    My body will know
    The chaos caused by paniced order
    The need to arrange
    Organize pain
    Resulting the same
    Affliction again
    I've failed to find
    What fate left behind
    As chilling I sit in the cold of my mind.


    ~C
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Really wonderful, Curtius!:smile: :smile: I'm glad to see you, I've missed your presence and your insightful succinct poetry!:smile: Hope you've been alright. Been wondering when you'd treat us to another of your works.:wink: As always, they're perfect, tho the feelings from whence they came make me feel bad that I can't make the pain go away for you.:sad:

    love always,

    least
     
  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    I think I am one that was just meant to feel it.


    ~C
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Wonderful poem C :heart:
     
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