Colorless Inside

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThornThatNeverHeals, Mar 31, 2011.

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  1. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    sickness holding me down
    frostbite cutting my skin
    people going around
    acting my life as a sin

    forget the forgiveness of all
    fuck each and every one
    you all say for help i can call
    nobody wants to do with the thorn

    go away from me
    get far away from me now
    you dont give a shit about me
    never did, never will

    death i seek
    its the only thing left for me
    letting my life leek
    though evasive as a cloud

    not even a color can be expressed into myself
    nor will you ever see the inner
    you tell me to go get help
    take your own advice before you give

    just leave me be
    please let me be
    go away now
    let me be.
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I am sorry you feel so abandoned i love the title of your poem it is often how i feel too hu gs
     
  3. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    There is nobody left who can see the colors, the ones other despise, the forgotten colors, or ones looked upon as lesser, i cherish. They will strip me of even these, now i have nothing left. Without even a color to hold to, how the hell can i hold to a person, someone who has promise to care, to help, to listen, and they simply tell me to go, then try to call me back like a dog. Im done, with nothing left inside, there is not a single reason to go on outside.
     
  4. SmolderingIce

    SmolderingIce Well-Known Member

    I love the flow of your thoughts.. I'm sorry that they are filled with sadness, but your words of emotions are beautiful. :itachi:
     
  5. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    thank you smoldering, that means alot
     
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