come clean

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thedeafmusician, Feb 11, 2006.

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  1. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    tired, lonely, hurt and scared
    that is nothing to compare
    to all the pain i feel within
    all happening under my skin

    the nightmares always leave me shaking
    not once is it that i feel safe in
    my bed at night, nor during the day
    why does it have to be this way?

    my smiles are fake, no longer real
    i always end up having to conceal
    what i feel inside, what i really think
    but i hate doing it, it just stinks

    day and night i feel the pain
    why can't it wash away with the rain
    come out clean and wash my heart
    wash my soul, with a brand new start
     
  2. Abacus21

    Abacus21 Staff Alumni

    I like the poem, TDM.

    I can relate to how you're feeling.

    Hope you're ok, and will talk to you soon :) :hug:

    Joe
     
  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    nicely put

    I hate our rhythyms of sadness....they always get stuck in your head
     
  4. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    I can relate to you so well.
    Take care.
     
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    I really like it! it was well done!
     
  6. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Thanks... :shy: I was a bit raw when I wrote it... although... it turned out a bit better than I thought that it would.

    TDM
     
  7. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    Well it turned out better then you thought because others liked it!

    But I am like that too...when I write...it sucks until I hear someone say they like it! And that makes my day!
     
  8. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    :hug:
     
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