Comotose and Chromosomes

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by NooSenseFantastika, Nov 29, 2008.

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  1. NooSenseFantastika

    NooSenseFantastika Well-Known Member

    I love daydreams and poprocks
    but all i got are nightmares and tequila shots
    needle tracks and a bloody nose
    white powder stains and a dying rose
    dont worry tho cuz i cant die
    im already dead my lifes a lie
    but oh well i guess ill say goodbye
    maybe later ill drop by
    i gota go get my fix
    fuckings guys and suckin dicks
    just so i can pay off my drugie bills
    im at the edge of comatose
    im staring down chromosomes
    my vision seems to be affected
    my health is serverly neglected
    and rhymes are all ive ever known
    never really had a place to call home
    but i guess its all my fault
    they all jus left me alone
    and then moved on
    i cant keep going like this
    im just way too depressed
    inflicting wounds im pressin on
    addiction is like a child with a loaded gun
    and now i see what ive been doing wrong
    i need to get out before that gun goes off
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  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni


    i sympathize.

  3. aki

    aki Well-Known Member

    wow! very powerful.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I like it :)
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