Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by MUtE, Aug 4, 2009.

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  1. MUtE

    MUtE Well-Known Member

    Was I born to suffer or to love in this world?
    To share love with that special girl
    Find a job to lose and bare it alone
    Feeling liek Atlas and staying home
    Tricked by cupid, a false love never grown
    Feeling liek Icarus in flight only flying to the unknown
    Am I to fight for love or would I be straying to close to the sun?
    I've already been burned once, wings melted and shot by a false gun
    What to do upond this hole in my heart? Shattered, falling apart
    Laying in bed losing my mind, what's so special about this girl?
    What is that binds her to my heart? To the world she was just one person
    To me she was the world just left me.

    Good? Bad? Let me know.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I am sorry your poem is sad one try to get out and meet new girls I know this girl broke your heart but try again.
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: good poem!
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