Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, May 30, 2006.

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  1. Friends... *sigh* it was another long hellish night. I come here first thing in the mornings now to see what I might find. I always discover something that eases my mind for the time - it really feels like 'contact'...

    * * * *

    A reaching, through words,
    the voice,
    the heart, inside another
    In silence heard,
    words that melt and soothe
    with magic balm
    A yearning to be known,
    to feel, for once, less alone
    in a moment that echoes
    with small mercy
    A ray of light in the deepest chasm
    this escape from chains of solitude,
    and demons torturing
    the beleaguered soul
    this vulnerability,
    this opening
    as the first breath,
    the gasp
    after the darkness
    of an unholy womb
    Ah, the promise in words
    to know you’ve been heard
    as well

    love, FAL1
    Last edited: May 30, 2006
  2. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Seems you are falling back into your your groove again FAL1...

    emotionally written...

  3. Birds of a feather, friend. I'm feeling quite especially "out there"/and/or trapped these days. Any relief is a welcome Godsend - glad for the company...

  4. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    Alone we struggle in strife
    The Dark clouds of the beast overtakes, making us stumble
    My hand reaches for yours
    touching my heart when grasped for
    hand in hand as each person connects
    we form a chain of empathy we grow stronger together
    Together we survive,
    the failing and falling still arises but alas will someday be less
    in our haven here we will grow together towards the light of peace.

    :) ARI
  5. smotherman

    smotherman Member

    Another beautiful piece FAL1!I agree with Curtius, very emotionally written!
  6. As ever, humbled, and thank you...

    What would I do without this place, this space

    "we form a chain of empathy"
    (most beautiful Ari)

  7. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    it is what you do in this space that is fill it with insight, and emotion, connection and humanity...thank you...big hugs, jackie
  8. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    it is a perfect poem...

  9. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I can only echo Jackie - she said it best. You're on a roll girl, keep 'em coming!:smile:


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