Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, May 31, 2008.

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  1. Content

    The earth turns, day into night
    I may not see the next sunrise
    But I am content…
    The world turns
    with mankind’s assumptions
    I will not presume wrong or right
    And I am content
    I have suffered so,
    and have come this to know,
    throughout and after my fears;
    Hell can well indeed exist here
    And I cannot explain
    what is sacred or profane,
    not when one can lead to the other
    in turn, again and again
    There is only the endless cycle
    And for now, I rest
    For the moment, at my best
    And I am content…

  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    great poem :arms:
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it very much and can identify with it so much. Please treat us to more of your works. You are so gifted in expression. I cannot write these days and depend on the writing of others to express myself.:smile:

  4. ...sometimes you can fall into that "Be Here now" thing purely by accident

    (though it's a blessing nonetheless)
  5. Lead Savior

    Lead Savior Well-Known Member

    Wonderful writing as always Gabberstiltskin, I wish I had your command of it

    (you make rhyming look effortless)
  6. For will have to promise me you firstborn...:wink:

    (as *if* you didn't have 'the gift'... rhyming or otherwise - JESUS!!!! :blink:)
  7. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    Wow. When I grow up I want to be able to write like that! lol. Great as usual Gab.
  8. fromthatshow

    fromthatshow Staff Alumni

    I love this :smile:
  9. Thanks so much, all of you...

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