Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Aug 16, 2007.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member


    Staring in the mirror
    I see my destiny staring back
    An overwhelming viper that
    Breaks through the glass
    Wrapping itself around me
    In the form of dread

    Waking from a pleasant daydream
    I stare into nothing
    And corruption stares back
    With the penetrating eyes
    Of a twisted old man
    His smile reminds me
    Of a soul, doomed to wander blind forever

    In the silent twilight
    Encroaching death in the form of night
    Becomes the harbinger
    For infectious decay
    And I wonder
    Will I become that twisted old man​
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    I love your poem. I like the way that you have worded it so that it has the maxium affect on people. I reread it 3 different times. It is a deep and it is an emotional poem. It also has power to it. If you ever need to talk I am here for you. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
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