couple poemz

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Jess, Oct 29, 2006.

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  1. Jess

    Jess Guest

    Clouds....

    Days go by
    Nothing seems the same
    Alone I cry
    What a shame... Can’t shake the pain
    Walking top of clouds
    Nobody sees me.. Anymore
    Falling behind the crowds
    Walk right out the door.

    Don’t know who I am,
    What I’ve become
    Do what I can...
    Lost in things that I’ve done

    Just want to go away,
    Turn out the light
    Lost in what to say
    Nothing feels right
    Run away, Top the clouds
    Free...
    Happy as I’ll ever be


    My Kind Of Music

    Picking strings on a guitar,
    That feeling lost never seemed so far

    Play me a melody,
    Hands dance across the keys, so beautifully

    Beats flowing through my veins,
    Reminding of past, overcome pains.

    The notes find their way into my heart,
    Emotions torn apart.

    The music that sets me free,
    Let it become a part of me.

    Taking over my insides,
    quieting my long lasting cries.

    Sing me a song of all the times,
    Sing a song of all kinds
    Let it flow from deep within you
    You Know What To Do...


    I know they're shit.. I wrote them a couple weeks ago when I really felt like shit. meh
     
  2. poison

    poison Well-Known Member

    I really liked the first one... and they're not shitty at all.
     
  3. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    No, they arent shitty, not at all. And unlike poison I especially like the second one... haha. :hug:

    TDM
     
  4. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :clap: :clap: :clap: :thumbup: liked them! :)
     
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