Crane Fly

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lentil Illness, Sep 16, 2006.

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  1. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    cry forever into
    the pool of nothing
    my eyes are dead
    and I am not bluffing

    dead eyes
    do not see

    the blatent bare
    black atrocities

    of inhumanity
    insane insanity

    the creature
    on the toilet wall
    displays existence
    the fight for us all

    to merely exist
    despite it all
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I really really like this one. I can relate to it - I am that creature on the wall, existing just to exist despite it all. I am but a cockroach to my Maker... but still one of His creations! And so are you! Live, then - live, despite it all.

    love always,

    least xoxoxox
  3. Datsik

    Datsik Forum Buddy

    I like that too. Properly written.

    Good job mate.
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