Crazy Quilt

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Things, Mar 3, 2010.

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  1. Things

    Things Well-Known Member

    Critique welcomed.


    Together but I'm a mess
    Quiet with so much to confess

    All stitched up like a crazy quilt
    Together but so badly built

    Waiting on the clock
    Begging for it to stop

    All stitched up and ready to go
    To where I don't even know

    I'm tired of my patterns
    All these pictures that don't matter

    Stuck with all this dust
    Nothing but my disgust

    All stitched up
    With nothing to show

    All stitched up
    With no where to go
  2. PerfectlyMurdered

    PerfectlyMurdered Well-Known Member

    Wow! You are a great writer, it flows very well with the rhyming. And I can also relate to this one a lot. Good job.
  3. Things

    Things Well-Known Member

    Thank you very much. :)
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    very cute i like the rhythm
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