cream

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by kurenai, Nov 27, 2009.

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  1. kurenai

    kurenai Well-Known Member

    I wade in dark water, ice bright
    Dead leaves regressing into green

    My soul stretches slow and lean
    the liquid luster of the light


    Of sun sundered at the seam
    without a peal of thunder

    The sky fries blue and cruel
    and dreamless. A fish school

    of horrible thoughts dissolving into cream.
    The black waves taking me under.
     
  2. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Great imagery, luvvit!

    :lone:
     
  3. bubblin girl

    bubblin girl Well-Known Member

    Amazing..love it
     
  4. kurenai

    kurenai Well-Known Member

    Thanks everybody!
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Good poem hun :hug:
     
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