Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by gentlelady, Aug 24, 2007.

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  1. gentlelady

    gentlelady Staff Alumni

    Vacant: this is how I found it's heart to be.
    Senseless: is how it's gaze appears to me.
    Cold: is the way it's touch must feel.
    Illusion: for it cannot possibly be real.
    And it's soul you ask?
    Has it one?

    Greed: this trait rules dominant in it's mind.
    Hate: it's psyche revels in all it finds.
    Instinct: it's organs use to function.
    Dull: between it's thought and speech, there is no junction.
    And it's soul you ask?
    It has none.

    Death: it thinks is a vital part of life.
    Disease: plague it's body, bring it strife.
    Destruction: This to cut it's lifespan short.
    War: some deadly kind of game or sport.
    And it's soul you ask?
    It needs one!
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  2. snafu

    snafu Member

    Great job, I really like it. And it's catchy too, like a a rock song...
  3. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member


    That was incredible. I :wub: it. Job well done.
  4. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    Very well written, probably the most interesting poem I've read on here in quite awhile. Possibly because it...describes someone I know. Anyway, good job.
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Oh that was beautiful indeed!:smile: I have the same questions, always asked, never answered. But you put it so well!:smile::hug::hug::hug:

    love, least
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    brilliant :)
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